Friday, 21 January 2011

What's wrong with jennifer?

we had to identify the errors in this magazine and whats wrong with the text
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  1. MonahanMedia30 January 2011 at 07:56

    Daniella
    Good work :-)
    you have said why the magazine cover is wrong and made some suggestions for how it could be improved.

    You have demonstrated that you understand a range of rules for making a magazine cover. AO1- Merit

    To improve this you could make a range of suggestions for how to improve this cover

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